02-14-11

In today's session we went over chapter 4. In this chapter we learned how to write, revise, and edit our first draft in writing a paragraph or an essay. The class was also assigned to do an exercise in writing our first draft, which we used in our previous lesson of our topic sentence. In this section we learned subjects such as: coherence, language, unity, emphasis, support, and sentences which spelled out in acronyms "CLUESS". We also did another exercise which we had to use the different tones. That was a lot of fun listening to our classmates try to act out the part for each tones. We have also learned the good and bad of sentences of how-to, and also how to be more specific and writing out a sentence. Oh and Happy Valentines Day!!!