Lab Session Feb 14, 2011

Happy Valentine's Day Everyone! Todays discussion was on stage three of the writing process which consist of Writing, Revising, and Editing. The exercise for today was just to write a draft of our previous topic we did on page 35 of freewriting. We also went over the CLUESS which stands for Cohenrence, Language, Unity, Emphasis, Support, and Sentences which is part of revising. For the language part under tone there were some examples of different tones such as Objective, Humorous, Angry and sarcastic, Servile, and Overbearing. I thought todays discussion was very interesting and sorry i cant show my mean side im not really good at acting. Good job volunteers. See you all next class!